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Cosmic Timing

April 22, 2009

by Marie-Claude Bourque

Since I am frantically packing for RT today, ready to join Tamara who is already there, I decided to refer you to another blog instead of writing my own.
Like most, I was awed and brough to tears by the Susan Boyle video but I never realized that she did have a shot at success 10 years ago and never made it then. And now, somehow planets align themselves right and she will probably have her dream realized.
And since I hear so many rejection stories these days, including my own, the post this week by Toni McGee Causey really striked a chord in me. Yes, there is a certain cosmic element in all success, yes great talents (like Ms Boyle or many aspiring writers out there) can be overlooked.
So if we are rejected, it may just be that the timing wasn’t right.
Persistence however can pay off. There is no guarentee, but a lot more chance to make it happen than if one quits!

So take heart and read “How do You Know When to Quit” by Toni McGee Causey

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mcslist: Notes from my tea towel: a list of Scottish words

February 11, 2009

by Marie-Claude Bourque

20080206highlander_2When I found out about being a finalist in the American Title, I was in the middle of a great online course with Sharron Gunn at Celtic Heart RWA, called Castles of Scotland. I had promised my classmate to send them a list of Scottish words.

You see my Scottish family often send me linen tea towels and this particular one I have list 24 Scottish words with their definition. So here I am, as promised but 6 months later, sharing the notes from my Scottish tea towel:

 

 

 

Braw:  Fine pleasant, especially weather (“It’s a braw day the day.“)

Mauchit: Dirty, filthy, sticky, muddy. (“Lookit the colour o’ ye, ya mauchit wee to’rag.“)

Dreich: 1. Drab 2. Dreary (referring to weather or a sermon)

Glaikit: Stupid, senseless, silly. (“He stood there wi’ a glaikit look oan his fizzok.“)

Besom: 1. Obstreperous girl or woman (“Dinnae pou’ yer brither’s hair, ya wee besom.“) 2. Woman of low moral standing; a hussy (“Thon  yin’s a right mucky besom.“)

Scunner: 1.To feel  aversion 2. To produce a feeling of disgust or loathing 3. A strong dislike (“Tak a scunner” “‘git oot o’ ma face ya wee scunner.“)

Laldie: A trashing, a sound beating, punishment (“Jist wait till ah get ma hauns oan ye, ya wee bugger. Ah’ll gie ye laldie“)

Canny: 1. Cautious, careful, hesitant, unwilling to rush into things. 2. Frugal, prudent (esp. with money) (“He’s that canny he aye pays for his round wi’ empty lemonade bottles.”)

Fankle1. To entangle, twist. 2. To knot. 3. To coil, wind. 4 to disorder, complicate. 5. An entanglement (“Dinnae get yerself in a fankle.“)

Drookit:  Drenched, soaked through. (“Ah fell in the burn an’ got drookit.“)

Wabbit: Exhausted, out of breath; unable to function due to extreme tiredness (“Playin’ wi’ thae weans has gote me wabbit.“)

Gallus1. Self-confident, daring; cheeky. 2. Stylish, impressive (“He’s pure gallus, by the way.“)

Teutcher1. One who derives from the Highlands of Scotland; more commonly used by city folks to describe rural dwellers. 2. Gaelic-speaker (mostly to each other)

Drouth: 1. Drought; long or extreme period of weather without precipitation  2. Thirst; dry mouth usually caused by excessive consumption of alcoholic beverages the previous night . (“Man, ah must’ve hud ten pints last night. Ah’ve got an awfy drouth.“)

Stramash: An uproar, a violent commotion or rowdy behavior, a melee. (“And players from both teams have now become embroiled in what can only be described as a giant stramash inside the penalty box.“)

Birl: To spin around, to revolve rapidly. (“Ah tell ye, efter a’ that dancin’ ma heid’s fair birlin.”)

Couthie: 1. amiable, sociable, esp. persons (“Och, she’s a couthie soul, so she is.“) 2. Comfortable, pleasant, snug (“Here, there’s a couthie wee pub doon-by.“)

Blether: 1. Person who chatters incessantly, someone who babbles on and on (“That wee yin o’ yours is an awfy blether getting.“) 2. To engage in conversation, long-winded or idle talk (“Ah met yer granny doon the toun, we hud a richt gid blether the gather.“)

Thrawn: 1. Twisted, distorted or mis-shapen. 2. Stubborn or obstinate (“Jeez O, yer thrawn auld bugger.“)

Wheesht: 1. A call for quiet or silence, used as an interjection Wheesht! to bring about,  or continue, the silence of others – esp. children (“Will ye wheesht, you pair! Ma heid’s loupin.“) 2. Quite, hushed “Haud your wheesht.” is to hold one’s tongue.

Greet: To cry, weep. (“Stope greetin’! It wisnae that sair.”)  greetin’ face cry baby, one who is prone to tears or constantly miserable.

Fouter: 1. One who muddles through, aimless, exasperating person (“Yer a fouter, gie it tae me, ah’ll dae it“) 2. A fiddly, troublesome task or job (“This is a right fouter, this“) FouteringYer foutering aboot! Stope it!“)

Skiver : 1. One who avoids tasks or work in general, a shirker. Skive (“Ah cannae be arsed wi’ this – ah’m  away fur a skive”) 2. Splinter of wood embedded in the skin.

Eejit: Idiot, simpleton, one not possessed of all their mental faculties, one who is unable to properly conduct their own affairs (“Yer off yer head, ya eejit. That’s no’ real dug.“)

 

Now I’ll be honest, but most of these words are unknown to me. But in my household, I do often hear  Teuther, Greetin’, Blether and Yer off yer head!!!

Happy Scottish writing everyone!!!

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mcslist: Tools of the trade.

January 28, 2009
marie-claude writing essentials!

marie-claude's writing essentials!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When I researched the past American Title finalists, I wandered over Trish Millburn’s website and OMG, there it was….the perfect work space, desk and chair and bulletin board and drawers and sticky notes. I am so jealous.

But then maybe not really. I hate being confined. I have one laptop and that’s it. That is my workspace. In bed, on the couch, in my Adirondack chair on the lawn, the coffee shop……I have no space. I’ve always dreamed of  “A room of One’s Own” but hey maybe in another life.

So here is my list of what I need to write…..very little:

  1. My laptop (Dell xpsm1210 – a very small and light  gamer laptop)
  2. Coffee (lots of coffee, can’t do anything without it)
  3. Headphones (the cheap kind, because I lose everything, or they get broken….NIN, Tool and Loreena McKinnit are my favorites to work to)
  4. Spiral notebooks (the real cheap kinds, so I don’t feel bad about writing whatever comes to mind. I write everything longhand, then type on the computer—I know I’m nuts!)
  5. A simple plastic sheet cover (for my scene list – see mcslist: 10 plots….no way!)
  6. Donald Maass workbook (because I like to fill up the questions to keep me going)
  7. John Gardner: On Becoming a Novelist (when I need to remind myself that a writer writes and keep practicing his craft like any other artist. John Gardner is very non-nonsense about this. Go back there and write….it’s not suppose to be easy!)
  8. A pen!! (duhh)

So tell me…what tools do you need to write? Are you a Trish Millburn with her dream office or do you just kind of scramble like I do? What is in your list of writing essentials….what is on your wish list…?

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MCSLIST: Taglines, your writing in a sound bite

December 3, 2008

by Marie-Claude Bourque

cool-writer-8Ever since I’ve joined writers loops, I’ve been fascinated by taglines. You know those little words in the signature lines that describe the “brand” of an author. Maybe it’s because I still missed those days as I worked as an aerobics director and had to make up the fitness class names such as “Tight ASSets”, “Ab Attacks” and “Burn, Baby Burn”. It took me a while to be brave enough to make my own tagline, but once some writers convinced me to build my own website, I felt I needed that “brand”. So I searched my writing soul and came up with “Dark Legends, Eternal Lovers.” I thought I’d get bored of it, but strangely I’m not. My ANCIENT paranormal series will always be about legends and immortal lovers, my GOTHIC WARRIOR story is certainly about legends and super dark. It seeems I’m all about dark romance with some mysterious legends involved.  In a way, my tagline helps me focus on what I want to write and what my niche is about.

So I became quite interested in other writers’ taglines and decided to make a list by perusing all the groups and forums I belong to. Starting with our own Qaey Williams, following by my writing partners and ending with my favorite tagline of all time –hope you will agree– from my RWA chapter president Shelli Stevens.

  1. “Quintessensually Quirky Romance from the Queen of Tease ”…. Qwillia Rain (Qaey Williams)
  2. ‘It’s that one shallow breath before your lips meet in a first kiss” …. My WP Candi Wall w/a Danci Law
  3. “What secrets does she hide? –Paranormal Romance” …. My WP John Roundtree
  4. “Tempestuous Tale, Wicked Fun” …. My WP Jennifer Bray-Weber
  5. “Love, Power, Fairytale Endings? Be careful what you wish for.” … My WP Jeffe Kennedy
  6. “Escape from Reality, Succumb to Temptation” … My WP Kayla kacer w/w Kaycee Kacer
  7. “Giving new meaning to the term alpha male.” … Terry Spear
  8. “ADVENTURE as rich as gold * LOVE as delicious as chocolate” … Delle Jacobs
  9. “Sexy romance that’s intense, passionate, heartwarming and fun” … Susan Lyons
  10. “In the mood for romance? Indulge yourself with a book from Patti Shenberger
  11. “Experience The Magic” …  Lynn Crain
  12. “Author of sizzling historical romance.  Bringing passion to life, one love story at a time” … Eliza Knight
  13. “Author of Dark-Edged Romance” … Lynne Connolly
  14. “Romance charged with danger from ages past!” … Beth Trissel
  15. “Unleash the Adventure, Discover the Romance” … Tami Dee
  16. “Compelling, Sensual Tales of Love and Forgiveness” … Anna Kathryn Lanier
  17. “Romance so hot… it melts your heart” … Nina Pearce
  18. Slip between the pages and find romance” … Nancy O’Berry
  19. “Spicy Romance with a Dash of Humor” … Jenny Gilliam
  20. “Heart-stopping danger…undercover romance” … Misty Evans
  21. “Strong Women, Brave Stories.” … Lyn Cote
  22. “…darkness and romance…” … Kim Knox-Kim Rees
  23. “Sugar or Spice…being naughty is so nice.” … Elaina Huntley
  24. “Action. Adventure. Erotic Romance.” … Dawn Montgomery
  25. “JOURNEYS OF LOVE every woman needs to take.” … Melissa Lopez
  26. “Romance accross the edge…” … Antonia Pearce
  27. “Romance with Heart.” … Nell Dixon
  28. “Romance that’s out of this world.” … Jennifer Colgan
  29. “Heartbreaking, Soul-Shaking, Love-making.” … Inez Kelley
  30. “Enjoy the Ahh… Sensation.” … Monica Burns
  31. “Daring to heat up fiction…with humor and heart.” Debora Dennis
  32. “Edgy, Elegant, Erotic Romance.” … Kate Pearce
  33. “I’m the author your mother warned you about.” … Shelli Stevens

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34. “If you believe, magic will happen” … Edie Ramer

35. “Embracing the creepier side of writing.” … Marcia Colette

36. “Passion, enchantment and adventure on the inner edge of the paranormal” … Cait Donnelly

37. “Indulge in a hot, delicious romance.” … Nicole North

38. ” Sensuous Timeless Tales.” … Judi Phillips

39. “Saucy Sexy Romps”  Judi Phillips w/a Pepper Goodrich

There are still a lot more space to this list. So please share yours with me and I’ll add it to my list! See how many we can come up with :)

Or maybe this list will inspire you to come up with your own tagline!

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MCSLIST: 10 Plots in One Book…No way!!!!

November 19, 2008

By Marie-Claude Bourque

cool-writer-54How many plots do you have in your book? You write romance, so the boy meets girl plot makes one. Right? If you add a subgenre, your hero and heroine chase a villain, that makes two. Add a little side story of the heroine’s best friend and that makes three plots.

My two single title manuscripts have 10 plots each. Yes…10 plots. In each scene, I advance two or three plots. Each plot is a mini story in the book. They develop, some end well, some don’t. They are all resolved at the climax.

You think 10 plots may be too many? Look at your projects, see if maybe there are not some plots, plot layers and subplots burried in there. Yes, there they are. you just didn’t notice.

So here is a generic list of Plots (plot layers and subplots) for a subgenre romance, with examples from ANCIENT WHISPERS (AW).

  1. The Romance-Plot (AW- True Soul Mates – Gabriel and his reborn soulmate Lily fall in love)
  2. Evolution of H/H Lovemaking - Plot Layer (AW – Trust and Control – The lovemaking makes increasing uses of magic until it ends in a powerful love magical ritual)
  3. The Heroine’s Journey - Plot Layer (AW – Lily and the Coven – Lily reclaims her magical abilities with the help of her mentor, the coven’s High Priestess)
  4. The Hero’s Journey - Plot Layer (AW- No escape from the Priory – Gabriel’s struggles with the hold his brotherhood of sorcerers has over him.
  5. The Heroine’s Duties – Plot Layer (AW – Lily’s Responsability – Lily inner turmoil over being the main caregiver of her beloved great aunt)
  6. The Time Bomb – Plot Layer (AW – Loosing his Soul – Gabriel will loose his soul to a evil mage  if he doesn’t convince Lily to mate with him at Beltane.
  7. Heroes Againts the Villain – Plot (AW – Defeat Theuron Keir – The battle of Lily and Gabriel to vanquish the evil mage Theuron)
  8. The Large-Scale Ongoing War for the Whole Series- Plot (AW – The Ancient War of the Souls- The war between the whole Priory of sorcerer and the evil mage)
  9. The Heroine’s Girlfriend Sad Struggle – Subplot (AW – Keira Possessed – Lily’s friend Keira becomes a victim of the evil mage Theuron.)
  10. The Heroine’s Sidekick Fun Story – Subplot (AW – Brianna’s Wedding – Lily’s best friend stuggles to plan her perfect wedding)

So here it is, 10 plots, 10 little stories that changes through the book. Go check your current work in progress, see how many plots and subplots you can find!

Let me know :)

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mcslist – Hotties Eye Candy

November 5, 2008
Actor Roy Dupuis

Actor Roy Dupuis

by Marie-Claude Bourque 

Last Saturday, I was lucky to attend a wonderful workshop at my local RWA chapter (GSRWA) by Gerri Russel (yes, the one and only American Title II winner) and her friend Gina Robinson, author of Spy Candy. So maybe it’s the title of Gina’s book which inspired me,  but today I just wanted to give you a list of actors that sometimes inspires me to write scorching heroes. You probably don’t know this, but my hero in ANCIENT WHISPERS, Gabriel Callan was partly inspired by French Canadian actor Roy Dupuis, who played a rugged woodsman from the late 19th century in a popular TV series called Caleb’s Daughter.

So here is my list..:)

Viggo Mortensen

Viggo Mortensen

 

  1. Roy Dupuis in Caleb’s Daughters.
  2. French actor Christophe Lamber in Highlander
  3. Brad Pitt in Troy and Legends of the Fall
  4. Jason Staham in The Transporter
  5. Keenu Reeve in Matrix
  6. Viggo mortensen in LOTR
  7. Daniel Craig in Layer Cake and Casino Royale
  8. Johnny Depp in anything
  9. Russel Crowe in Gladiator
  10. Orlando Bloom in POTC
  11. Liam Neeson in Rob Roy
  12. Sean Connery in anything (even now…have you seen is latest Louis Vutton add?
  13. Hugh Jackman as Wolverine (Nearly forgot. Thanks guys for mentionning him!)
Russell Crowe
Russell Crowe

I see a pattern here, my hotties are a little scruffy. I do like a tortured bad boy. But, maybe it’s because it’s too early in the morning, my memory fails me at the moment. Anything you wish to add to my list? Feel free, I know there’s more LOL.

And when you’re done adding to my list, please mosy over to the Title Magic blog for Michelle Lauren’s interview!

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mcslist — editing

October 22, 2008

 By Marie-Claude Bourque

My husband’s name is Craig and I’ve been a little jealous of his craigslist jokes, so I thought it was time for me to come up with my own list, don’t you think. So since I am not the imaginative type, I write lists all the time. In fact, most of my writing endevours are done through a series of lists, plotlists, scene list, task lists, synopsis cheat list, ect. And they get mixed up with my groceries lists, to do lists, list of what I want to do when I grow up. You get the picture!!! -)) Yes I know a little weird, but hey it works for me.

So today, since I am currently highlighting myself away in a Margie Lawson INTENSIVE Digging Deep class, I thought I’d offered you this, my editing list. I usually edit one chapter at a time. So once I’ve done my first rought draft, hold on tight, here I go:

1-   Highlight my text and look for balance in various part  (see Margie Lawson EDITS System)

2-   Read chapter two times out loud after changing the font for a fresh look.

3-   Read again and ask why things happen all along (check for logic)

4-   Read and check for telling

5-   Read and check for hooks/hangers at the beginning and end of chapter and between scene (check Terry Spear wonderful online class on hooks)

6-   Read and check for action order (I like to put action as it unfolds in a sentence)

7-   Read and check for settings, is it seen through the POV character?

8-   Read check for 6 senses (don’t forget extra-sensory feeling, like eerie feelings, feeling something is about to happen)

9-   Read and check for sentence pace short/long, mix them up.

10- Software search for the words look, sense, feel (my overused words)

11- I then cut and paste the chapter in the online software AUTOCRIT that will check for repeated words and phrases, sentence length variation, cliche, oversuse of a first sentence word (I tend to start with the word “She” a lot.

12- Read through and check for words with Latin root. Because I am French, Latin words come first to me. I try to change them for stronger anglo-saxon words.

13- Read 2 more times aloud with different fonts.

Somewhere along the way, I have sent my chapter to trusted writing partners and will go through their comments. After doing this to each chapters, I have what I call my second draft, which I put away in a file somewhere, out of sight for 3 months.

Jee, I’m tired just reading this -)))) What is your editing process? Have I missed anything, let me know!!!

 Marie-Claude :)

 

 

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